2010-05-22 [The Dizzy Raven]: hehe cute ^_^

2010-05-23 [pegasus1000]: It took a lot to not get any smutches. Kits do have more rounded faces. The noses do need work. I didn't want to erase once I had the heavy shading on the nose.

2010-06-06 [pegasus1000]: New Picture time. I know it is an older one for me but I actually would like some feed back for it.

2010-06-06 [Chel.]: Snow leapard! Awesome! One thing though that could use clarification... what is that "hump" that is in front of the back leg? I'm not sure if that's an underbelly patch, the other leg or just part of the belly.

2010-06-06 [arthemis_]: Maybe the legs can use some work, I've trouble with it's front legs, as one seemed thicker then the other. Also the head is not symmetrical, but that's a point of perspective I'm not really good at.
I simple LOVE the way you made the fur of the leopard. The spots are near perfect and there is actually a hint of fur that I find amazing! The background is marvelous too. I really admire your skills in pencil drawings! Awesome.

2010-06-06 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: Very nice. The only comment I have on this is that the head seems a bit small, and maybe you could make some areas a litlle darker to give it more depth.

2010-06-06 [Pnelma Tirian]: I like the rocks in the background, but the grass and ground could use a lot of work, particularly the base of the grass. It needs resolution there where it touches the ground. Also, the shadow underneath the leopard should be beneath his belly as well as under his feet.

2010-06-07 [pegasus1000]: First I would like to thank you all for you comments. It will be remembered when I go to draw my next furry creature.

Now to answer some of your comments. The part between the leg and the belly is just that. Cats hindquarters are just weird with that extra bit of skin. I really do agree that the face looks flat especially with the nice depth I have on the body.
The grass is a story in itself. I started drawing it and once I was about half way done I had a “Oh Crap” moment when I remembered that I was drawing a Snow leopard not a jungle leopard, so I started on the rocks. In retrospect I should have kept going with he grass and tried blending it in… Then again I would probably be worried about losing the leopard. Any help here of what would be best would be great.

2010-06-07 [arthemis_]: Lose the grass all together, and make like 'little rocks' to make the ground snowy. Maybe add snow on the big rocks. Cat's hindquarters are indeed weird like that, but maybe add some spots to the 'lumb' too? 

2010-06-10 [pegasus1000]: Thanks for the idea [arthemis_]

2010-06-19 [pegasus1000]: New picture.

2010-06-19 [Chel.]: Oh! Pretty scales! I would not have the patience to do that! One thing though, the face/head sort of looks like it's melting?

2010-06-19 [Pnelma Tirian]: The head is just a little bit squashed, that's all. It could be a little longer, but her expression is beautiful. Her tail fin is very delicate and frilly; I like that. :D

2010-06-19 [arthemis_]: I think she is holding her head to the side, but if you look fast, it does indeed seem her right (left for us) side is a bit lopsided. Also her tail, doesn't seem right to me. For me it looks like she starts to have a full tail, then a split tail and then a full tail again... Or is that just me?

I love the scales, the color on them is marvelous, also the fin is very 'fish-like' which is a hard thing to do. I also like how you did the left (right for us) arm, a little behind the body. The right (left for us) hand is also cool (I hate drawing hands). Total picture: 7/10 :D

2010-06-21 [Eyonic]: only thing i have a problem with, as said above, the head does look a little on the squashed side

2010-07-13 [pegasus1000]: new

2010-07-13 [Aeolynn]: Overall, I think this would look good with a lot more work. If you look closely, you can see that their head shapes are off (More round then they should be), and the perspective isn't correct either.

I think it would be better if you redrew this, focusing on the perspective, suggested lines (marked with shadows) and more wispier hair. Your moms hair is more wavy then lines, you should have fun with those long sweeping shapes

Don't be afraid to spend more time on the linework

2010-07-14 [Pnelma Tirian]: definitely work on the shapes of the heads; try drawing a silhouette of them first.

2010-08-25 [pegasus1000]: New

2010-08-25 [Chel.]: Definitely an improvement from the last one! The figures look more natural and not as squashed as in the first attempt! ;]

2010-08-25 [Aeolynn]: poses look more natural, and they both look a lot happier